By Elaine L. Orr
Characters in my books or stories periodically end up in a hospital emergency room, usually because of a diabolical act by another character. They don't stay long, but I'm often told how realistic my hospital scenes are.
I should hope so. I can't count the number of orthopedic incidents (for want of a better term) I've been through. I could win any race on crutches. What it's given me is perspective. What's it like to ride on a gurney? You can count ceiling tiles or lights as you whiz by. When you're wheeled into an operating room, it's really cold.
Here's an exchange at the beginning of Vague Images, a Jolie Gentil book.
IF IT HADN’T been for the deer that ran in
front of my car I wouldn’t have hurt my foot jamming on the brakes. If I hadn’t
hurt my foot I wouldn’t have gone to Ocean Alley’s hospital. If I hadn’t been
in the hospital I wouldn’t have seen him. Not that I could follow him. I was on
my butt in the emergency room.
Doctor
Birdbaum raised his voice. “Jolie, you need to lie still while I wrap your
ankle.”
“I
need to…”
“You
need to be still.” His voice was firm.
I
stared at the fluorescent light above me and winced. “Ow. Does it have to be
that tight?”
“Only
if you want it to do any good.” Dr. Birdbaum is a short, round man who rarely
exhibits any sense of humor. I didn’t think he was kidding now.
Riding a subway helps with scenes where people are squeezed together so tightly burping is not an option. If you've every rear-ended the car in front of you, you'll remember the feelings of guilt and the strong desire to yell at yourself for following too closely. You don't have to write a car accident scene, the sense of how-could-I-be-so-dumb can apply to many settings.
In talking about her character, Miss Marple, Agatha Christie said: "She's had a long life of experience in noticing evil, fancying evil, suspecting evil and going forth to do battle with evil. - Author: Agatha Christie
Dame Agatha added many experiences for Miss Marple, and she seized them all.* * * * *
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